I definitely agree that correlation vs causation has not been established here.
Even if we interpret these relationships as causal - and conclude that increasing diversity has a benefit - in my view, diversity itself is probably not the real cause. Even if we were able to demonstrate that increasing diversity had a benefit, I suspect the real underlying reason would be that we had increased the levels of specific beneficial types of microbes.
Its easy to construct hypothetical examples where increasing the diversity can be detrimental (e.g. adding a bunch of novel pathogens), or where decreasing the diversity is beneficial (e.g. by introducing silver bullet drugs that selectively kill only a specific set of pathogens).
The apparent benefits of diversity, in my view, probably stem from the aggregate benefits of a large number of interacting microbes, whose many functions in the marine ecosystem we have barely scratched the surface on understanding.
Lacking that knowledge, I think increasing diversity is a reasonable strategy for trying to introduce the unknown beneficial microbes from the ocean into our tank ecosystems. (*as long as its from a source we can rationally expect to house natural marine microbial communities)