English essay

[EthanDouglas]

As a final project for my english class, we have to write a “process analysis” paper on any topic we desire. I chose how to set up a reef tank. Would it be okay to post it here for criticism? I get that this is a little strange, but I figured it would be worth a shot to try and see. Thanks for the help

 

[Sarah24!]

Hello,

Sure post away, I just finished my final paper for school and it was 327 pages long give or take. (I really hope yours isn’t that long, mine was bad enough). It would help if one could see what the assignment is, requirements etc. normally when one looks for constructive criticisms, it’s also editing and proofreading the paper :)

 

[EthanDouglas]

Hahaha I guess I should have specified. I’m a high school senior so my paper isn’t quite that long. The instructions were fairly open. We had to pick something we enjoy and explain how to do it. There weren’t any length requirements. I was writing in a google doc, so hopefully it opens okay. I’m sort of looking for both proof reading and making sure I have the correct information/I’m not missing any major steps. Thanks so much for the help

https://docs.google.com/document/d/12Jt228bJvR55_M1ggXYXoU8qC8rcGZF7ge2cssX3D-g

Edit: that bullet list at the end was sort of a guideline for my train of thought. Not part of final

 

[Sarah24!]

Hello,

I sent a pm with some suggestions:)

 

[NS Mike D]

nice essay. I didn't proof read it but rather quickly read it for content. It's well constructed and organized. This is a hobby that has different opinions on how to do it right and there remains a lot we we do not know. I appears, however, you wrote a good game plan worthy of page one sticky status.

 

[K. Steven]

Hello,

Sure post away, I just finished my final paper for school and it was 327 pages long give or take. (I really hope yours isn’t that long, mine was bad enough). It would help if one could see what the assignment is, requirements etc. normally when one looks for constructive criticisms, it’s also editing and proofreading the paper :)

I hope that was a dissertation

 

[Sarah24!]

Hello,

It was that actually, and I’m so glad it’s over. I’m glad I’m not the professor and aids, because there were like 19 students in that research class.