Lol I'm married. 6 yrs strong comical negativity for sure tone is everything. Tough on a forum. Gets me in trouble.Started out strong.
You based out really nice but you haven't done jack bologna in months.
This feedback sandwich is missing the bottom bun..
Then it just goes off the rails with negativity.
Just looking fat at the waist and keeping that middle finger like disposition to ya. Meanwhile your tank mates who joined have new sticks growing from the base already. You are pathetic in comparison.
I will go out on a limb here and presume that you are not married.
The sign off is good and it will appreciate that you put your expectations out there at the end so it knows what you want.
Never go with the first draft.
First drafts always need a second eye