Randy Holmes-Farley
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Randy - before we get back on track, can you send me your book.
Now we can get back on track.
OK, off track a bit more. Yes, I can send it, but I have not looked at it in a decade. I'm not even sure which version is which. Not being any sort of expert on how to actually write novels, I wrote them as if I was telling a story, and I use passive voice a lot. I'm sure I do it here all the time. Later I read that authors are strongly encouraged to not use passive, so I rewrote some but not all of it. Made other edits at the time too. Now I realize I probably should just have stuck with what I thought seemed right in my head, since such rules are dropping by the wayside.
In any case, few folks have read the whole thing. I submitted the requested summary stuff to a bunch of sci fi literary agents at the time (about 2014), but got nothing positive enough to proceed, so it sits stored on my hard drive.